28 Aralık 2009 Pazartesi

downloading free music

Thesis statement:Although downloading free music is illegal we don't have another choice.

Supporting sentence:In our days the charge of albums is too much expensive.
In contrast to their charge in our country peoples income is not enough to buy them.
Opponent sentence:It is illegal and there are people who earn money by making these albums.
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  1. Sedat Akayoglu28 Aralık 2009 00:55

    It is not free music. If it is free, there is no problem. You should strengthen your thesis statement. Moreover, you should also write your refutation. How will you refute the opponents' ideas?

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  2. saliha28 Aralık 2009 00:56

    thanks I will try.

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